Eternal Warmth
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Hello!
I am making this thread to encourage others to read my first fanfic, confusingly titled Eternal Warmth (if anycreature has a good suggestion for a title, please let me know!) It is my first time writing something of this length, but I'm fairly happy with how it turned out.
I would love to hear thoughts or criticism so I can improve my writing. For example, I know there are spots where the narrator's awareness changes between omniscient and character limited. Let me know what you think!
Warning: It is quite sad or bittersweet, read at your own discretion.
I am making this thread to encourage others to read my first fanfic, confusingly titled Eternal Warmth (if anycreature has a good suggestion for a title, please let me know!) It is my first time writing something of this length, but I'm fairly happy with how it turned out.
I would love to hear thoughts or criticism so I can improve my writing. For example, I know there are spots where the narrator's awareness changes between omniscient and character limited. Let me know what you think!
Warning: It is quite sad or bittersweet, read at your own discretion.
